Writing Effective Emails - How to Write Powerful Emails That Get Results

Email. If you're like me, that word conjures up itschallenge you to begin coming up with the
nemesis, spam. How I hate spam! Yet it becomescatchiest, most interesting titles you can for your
harder and harder to determine where the line isemails. Why? Back to the previous point, WIIFM.
between spam and useful emails. So in thisConsider that the title of your email will make or
powerful little article, we'll take a look at how tobreak whether someone reads it. It is the
write brilliant emails that get results, as well as 7"advertisement" for your email, and it needs to
writing techniques you can use immediately tosparkle. That means take a moment to come up
improve the response you are getting from yourwith something interesting, exciting, and that ties
audience.in with the other person's interests and needs. For
The key to writing effective emails is knowingexample: "I need to Speak with You" How does
what you want to say, and saying it in thethis hit you as a title? For me, almost scary.
shortest possible way, clearly and effectively.What, are they going to off me in a backroom
When you put it that way, it sounds easy, doesn'tfor crimes against humanity? It also states no real
it! Yet Mark Twain is credited with writing in asubject, only the sender's needs. Let's try adding
letter, "I apologise for the length of this letter. Iin the recipients interests, and we get: "Would you
did not have time to make it shorter."Like a Promotion? I need a Moment" Now that
Therefore the first key to brilliant emails is writingwould get my attention if I received that from
concisely. Let's look at several easy techniquesmy boss! Or even a stranger, for that matter.
you can use to accomplish that.Granted, you may not have exciting good news,
One Subject Per Emailbut truth to tell, even normal communications can
Often we begin our communications haphazardly,have a spicy, interesting edge to them. Of course,
rambling from one subject to another untilsimple requests for meeting and other routine
suddenly we have created a ginormous, wall ofthings don't need this treatment, but anytime you
words that only the most daring would bother toneed a way to give your emails an extra edge,
even scan, let alone read. So the first key touse this technique! And why not? Spammers do it
writing concisely is to break up your emails intoall the time to get their emails read. You can just
subjects.start noticing which spam titles catch your
What does that mean? It means, keep each emailinterest, and why, and then begin using the writing
you send on one topic only. Don't mix up severaltechnique that the spammer used for your next
projects and discussions and ongoing events inimportant email.
the same email. Make the subject of the email4. Make a Clear Request One of the key principles
the sole reason for your email.of communication is getting what you want from
This will also make it easier to categorize emailsanother person, and also fulfilling their needs. But
from each person/project into your email folders.you can't do that unless you make a request. Too
What a mess to have one email deal with 7many times we shy away from coming right out
different projects. Where to put it? Yourand making our request. Yet this is the only
recipients will be pleased if you start this practice.reason to ever communicate with anyone, really.
"But I have so much to write!"Think about it. All of your communications, at their
Then break up your communications into severalcore, have a request at heart. You are writing
short emails each covering its own subject.because you want someone to do something for
Use Bullet Pointsyou, talk to you, meet with you, go away from
- Make your points clean and clear using bullets, soyou, get involved with a project, etc. These all
that anyone who scans your article can pick uphave simple requests at their core. Even an email
the main ideas quickly.to thank someone or offer recognition has a
- See how easy it is for your to read theserequest at heart: you are asking the other person
thoughts with bullet points?to accept your thanks, and possibly even respond
- It will help you to organize your thoughts moreback to you. So start thinking about your emails in
easilyterms of "what request am I making of this
- It will go a long way towards making yourperson," and your emails will become much more
communications more effective.effective and easier to read. And, the side benefit
Only 2-3 Points Per Emailis you'll probably start getting more of what you
actually want! Now how's that!
1. Use no more than 2-3 points per email5. Keep Negative Emotions Out I can't stress this
2. Use bullet points, or number them, as describedpoint enough! No matter how innocent or small a
above!remark may seem to you, if there's anything
3. This will make it very easy for your recipient toderogatory or inflammatory about it, leave it out!
handle your communications quicklyWhat may be funny to you could trigger some
"But I need to write more than that!"deep emotional issue in the other person.
Then you need to have a meeting with theSeriously. Leave negativity or off-color remarks
person, or you need to seriously reconsider whyout of any email. There are a few great reasons
you are emailing them. Remember, tick tock tickto do this. First off, legally speaking, if you have
tock. Nobody wants to read a long email! Let mewritten negative emails to someone, you could
say that again: nobody wants to read a long email!get in trouble for harassment, or worse,
Tatoo that on your arm and refer to it often, ifdepending on what you wrote of course.
you have diarrhea of the alphabet.Remember we are now in an age when
Write Shorter Paragraphsabsolutely everything is being monitored, or at
Write shorter paragraphs, each with a topicleast can be monitored. You don't want the IT
sentence.department intercepting an email, or another
"Huh?"coworker or even the boss getting hold of
That means each paragraph should have onesomething negative. Secondly, you will never get
main idea that you state clearly, usually in the firstthe results you want from negative emails. I don't
sentence. If you find another idea creeping in, orcare how clear or right you are, if you are having
you have a paragraph longer than 3-4 sentences,an issue with the other person I can 100%
consider making a new one. It's easy: just hitguarantee you will only make the situation worse
"Enter!" Your recipients will thank-you, as it makesby "giving them a piece of your mind." Not only
it much easier to understand what you are tryingwill it not give you peace of mind, but usually you
to say. (Note: this paragraph is 4 sentences longwill have sender's remorse the moment you sent
(plus this one), and just notice your reaction toit, too. Thirdly, even if you manage to state your
having to read this much text at a time...wouldissues non-threateningly, the other person may
you really want a paragraph longer than this?"hear" it differently. Think of an email like a
Remember, tick tock tick tock).dramatic script, interpreted by actors. Will the
Use the Spell/Grammar Checkeractor (your recipient) getting your script know
In this day and age, there's simply no excuse foryour meaning? Will they interpret it correctly on
sending out emails with misspelled words andthe stage in their heads? If they get it wrong, it
grammatical errors. Your email is your emissary,could be bad news for you! Therefore, if you are
your ambassador if you will, that represents youhaving an issue with someone, and you absolutely
and your wants/needs. You don't want yourmust email them about it, then the only thing you
recipients to judge you for such a simple littleshould write is that you would like to speak with
issue. Yet they will! So take the extra 30 secondsthem or meet with them in person. Even if "they
and use the spell/grammar checker of your emailstarted it." No buts! Just do this!
program.6. Respond within 24 Hours Nobody likes to wait!
If you're using Outlook, you can even get theIf there's an urgent or even important email,
spell check to happen automatically for youmake sure you are on top of it. In fact, make it a
before you send out the email! Just look in thehabit to respond to all emails within 24 hours or
help system for how to set up this convenientless ("or less" being the operative phrase here!)
little feature.7. Keep Track of Emails The final piece of the
Read on to discover 7 powerful techniques youcommunication puzzle is to keep your emails
can use to instantly boost the effectiveness ofsorted and organized so you can find them easily.
your emails...Too many inboxes are one big jumble! You can
7 Powerful Ways to Get Results from yourget started right away with making folders for
Emailsyour contacts and projects, and then filing emails
Besides using the powerful writing techniques Iinto those folders when you get them. A great
have just shared with you, I urge you to considerway to do this, if you are using Microsoft Outlook,
using the following additional ideas to really makeis to use the Rules feature. We will discuss this
your emails as successful as they can be.great tool in an upcoming How-To, but in the
meantime use the help system to figure it out. It
1. Always state why you are emailing, up frontmakes all your incoming emails automatically get
"Hello John, I'm writing because I wanted to findfiled into the right folders for you, as soon as you
out your availability for a project I think youreceive them. Being able to put your finger (or
would enjoy." - Simple, powerful, pleasant,mouse!) on exactly the right email is terrifically
effective. "Hello Johhn, how are you? It's Mike,helpful, and using email folders will go a long way
from IT. Did you catch the game last night?towards helping you get a handle on your
Anyway Susan saw you in the hall yesterday andcommunications with others. Ultimately, this will
she mentioned something to me about how youenable you to get more of what you want and
might like to check out a project we are doing..." -be able to respond quickly to others' needs.
Isn't that a lot to wade through? I'll say it again:Conclusion
tick tock, tick tock. Most people will scan theI have presented some valuable ideas for turning
beginning of the email and if they can't figure outyour emails into powerhouses that get you the
what you want right away, they may stopresults you need. We discussed:
reading.- One Subject Per Email
2. WIIFM There's a radio station playing in- Use Bullet Points
everyone's head, and if you don't know about it,- Only 2-3 Points Per Email
you will miss out on possibly one of the most- Write Shorter Paragraphs
important ways to communicate of all time. That- Use the Spell/Grammar Checker
radio station is "WIIFM," and it plays "What's In ItWe also looked at 7 powerful ways to get results
For Me" 24/7. That means you need to statefrom your emails, including:
what's in it for your recipient right away. You can
combine this with the first technique, of always1. State Why You're Emailing Up Front
stating why you are emailing up-front. Our2. WIIFM
example then becomes: "Hello John, I'm writing3. Create Catchy Subjects
because I wanted to find out if you would be4. Make a Clear Request
interested in a directing project that pays $97 per5. Keep Negative Emotions Out!
hour, and allows you to use your own equipment6. Respond within 24 Hours
and produce your own films at your discretion. I7. Keep Track of Emails
know this has been a dream of yours for someEven though using these techniques might feel
time, and you were the first name to come toforeign to you at first, I urge you to give them
mind when I came across the project..." Note howan honest try. Begin using them immediately, and
I've dovetailed the reason I'm writing with theI guarantee you will begin to get powerful results
recipient's wants. You can't make a morefrom your email communications with others. To
powerful statement than that!your success!
3. Create Catchy Subjects This might sound sillyUntil next time, we'll solve our problems Bit by Bit.
at first, or even ridiculous, but I am going to